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Date: May 19, 2551

Report to the office of ONI, Section 2
Departement for insurrectionist activities
File regarding Lance Corporal Allegra "Dawn" Fischer (Service Number 45271-21088-AF)
Code name "Rapace Noir"

FULL NAME: Classified
ALIAS: Allegra „Dawn“ Fischer
HEIGHT: 1.81m
WEIGHT: 76kg
GENDER: Female
DATE OF BIRTH: Unknown
BIOLOGICAL AGE: Late 30s
CITIZENSHIP: Unofficially Rhaetia (illegal insurrectionist colony): Glassed in the end of 2525 --> Classified
Officially Harvest, Outskirts farm
FORMER OCCUPATION: Classified
BRANCH: UNSC Marines
GROUP: Orbital Drop Shock Troopers (recon, sniper, assault, assassination)
RANK: Lance Corporal

Her ignorance towards direct orders from superiors would be a reason to immediately arrest her, but her kill count of [classified] assured Covenant kills and her dubious fame in the UNSC, work for her. Still her former life as pacifist of insurrectionist actions on an illegal colony, her openly displayed lack of loyalty towards the UNSC and Earth, combined with several mysteriously missing parts of her operation video logs who suggest willful sabotage are alarming. The only reason to give this person a weapon in her hands is the fact that she seems far more interested in pointing it at the Covenant, than the UNSC. There is a high antipathy towards the Covenant race known as “Elites” and her actions against Covenant forces and the associated enjoyment of those combined with her habit to take trophies in form of Elite mandibles can only be described as shocking [cross reference to the events of the Hat Yai campaign], though those actions often have self destructive traits. Therefore her psyche can also be described as depressive, showing a medium risk of suicide, though she mostly plays the role of the lone wolf, vehemently blocking further psychological analysis.
Cause of her labile psyche, her ignorance towards superiors and her dubious past (medicinal and ONI interrogation files enclosed to this report), this person means a high risk to the UNSC and its goals. Increased surveillance through ONI personnel recommended.

1st class ONI Officer Nicolas Tillman Faucherre, Section 2

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Ok, somehow I totally couldn't do what I should, so I violated my sketchbook until this turned out.
Yeah, pretty ugly and totally the reason why I should stick with Aliens and Monsters instead of Humans, but it was worth a try...

I thought it might be boring to only just give Dawn the space black armour as feature, so I added the camouflage net around the neck and the skirt thingy wich may turned out a bit long, so in futurer drawings featuring Dawn it might be shorter. Or what do you think?
Drawing women is hell... I maybe just sat half an hour halfnaked in front of the mirror to get some reference, still here she looks somewhat manly and has again no tits. Why?! Face looks shitty and absolutely not what I wanted (looks more like a zombie to me, than a freaked out person) plus eyes might be a bit to dark, but I think the scars turned out pretty good. Perspective of the knife sucks too and the red stuff on her helmet should be her blood...
Yeah, pretty much big fail on her face all in all, but at least she looks pissed and ready to kill some Elites :iconfacepalmplz:

The emblem is the one of her homeplanet, an illegal colony called Rhaetia who was glassed in the beginning of the war. I mixed the emblem of Switzerland and it's canton Grisons, where most inhabitants of the colony came from. The six stars represent the six idioms of Romansh spoken there, called Vallader, Puter, Sursilvan, Suotsilvan, Surmiran and Dolomitas.

PS: That thing around her neck is the mandible of a Sangheili Zealot.

>> MORE OF MY HALO FANART HERE <<

Halo belongs to Mocrosoft.
Allegra "Dawn" Fischer belongs to me.
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:iconsean188:
Sean188 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
maybe in the next one make sure she doesn't look like a zombie in halo armour with scar's
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, coloring fucked up pretty hard...
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:iconramrum:
Ramrum Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
she's scary D:
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:icondragunalb:
Dragunalb Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
That's because I fucked up coloring her face ^^;
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:iconramrum:
Ramrum Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
it's like she's staring into your soul!
i hope she wont try to beat me to death with it
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nah, she'd rather just cut your throat ;p
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Ramrum Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
D:
so uh...i um.. like her shoes...
nice detail you put in 'em
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
lol thanks
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Ramrum Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
the knife too, though it's scary (but i guess that's the point)
reminds me of a fillet knife, hope she doesn't skin her enemies with it
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nah, but she likes to cut off the mandibles of the Elites she killed as a trophy.
Oh and sometimes she executes with the "blood eagle" which basically is cutting the victim along the spine so the ribs get cut off from it. Then the ribs get broken, so the entire section of the back gets clapped open what looks like bloody eagle wings. If the victim is unfortunate enough to still be alive at this point, then she'll either rip out the rungs or the heard from the opened back.
Oh so bloody! True story! [link]
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AxelHonoo Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks like a female Terminator/ODST. Lolz :XD:
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:icondragunalb:
Dragunalb Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, she'll always be back, but I really fucked up her face here ^^;
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AxelHonoo Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lolz.

I have to agree. I thought she looked different in this piece. ^^;
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Her face looked way better here in the sketch [link] but with coloring I fucked it up... Well me and realistic human faces, that's never been my strength and when I want Dawn to look tough something fucked up like this comes out. I think I'd better stick with doodles of her. Oh I suck so much! :XD:
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AxelHonoo Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're right she does look better in the sketch. Heh I use to do the same thing. Don't worry you'll get better at coloring, heck I'm still learning myself. You know something that always helped me out when I was doing faces and expressions like being tough I looked at myself in the mirror. It my sound silly but really helped.

You'll get better I promise. You're better at humans and armor then I am that's for sure. But we all have goods and bads. :XD:
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hehe, yeah I do that with the mirror all the time, though it doesn't works always and I mostly end up half naked in front of the mirror when it goes to draw women ^^
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AxelHonoo Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha ha ha, lolz. Well if that works for you then I say keep on doing it. :D
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I will :meow:
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davethesoldier Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
XD! HOP SHWIIZ
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Aber voll! Muass da aber no abändera, miar gfallts nit meh ^^
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davethesoldier Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
also mier kvalds so wie es isch ;)
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Haha, danke vilmol ^^
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Jadeitor Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I would like have a necklace like her XD
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Me too, but I guess the Elite won't like it if you'd want to cut his mandibles to make some cheap costume jewellery out of them :XD:
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Jadeitor Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
XD
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Aki03 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Das nenn ich mal: Scheiß Tag! xD
Oder sie schaut einfach nur so aus, als hätte sie nen Bad Day hinter sich. Ne ne... der begegne ich lieber nicht im Dunkeln ^^
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Die is schon badass, nur leider hab ich deren halbwegs vernünftig hinbekommene Fresse durchs Coloring irgendwie total versaut, vergleiche hier [link]
Nun sieht sie aus wie ne Mischung aus Zombie, Ötzi, Gollum un Paris Hilton nach ner unheimlichen Begegnung mit dem Rasenmäher...
Ganz ehrlich, diese Zeichnung ist total peinlich, so mies wie die ist und die wandert direkt in den Skizzenblock, sobald ich meinen nächsten Versuch dahab, wo ich mir mehr Mühe geben werd das so hinzukriegen, wie bei dem letzten Elitebild da, und wenn ich die ganze Nacht Modell vor dem Spiegel stehen muss! Tja, Menschen waren nochnie meine Stärke...
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Aki03 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Naja, vielleicht sind die Narben etwas zu krass, wenn ich mir den Vergleich so ansehe. Aber es ist völlig normal dass neue Dinge ihre Zeit brauchen, frag mich mal wie lange ich für den Mech-Eliten gebraucht habe o_O

Vor allem bis ich den Anatomisch halbwegs korrekt hinbekommen habe und den dann so ausweiden musste, dass dann ein kleines Mädchen darin Platz hatte. Und dann eben noch viele Einzelteile einbauen, damit es wie ne Maschine aussieht bzw. die Türen dann so anordnen, damit man ein- und aussteigen kann. Der nächste Elite wird aus Fleisch und Blut ^^.
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Gut, aber das Resultat beim Mecheliten sah am Ende auch dementsprechend geil aus, während ich mich für meines ins nächstbeste Loch verkriechen muss -___-° Aber gut, ich habs auch nur an einem Abend gemacht.
Ich kann die Eliten in und auswendig viel besser als Menschen, du Frauen in Rüssis, wir sollten tauschen :XD:

Freu mich schon den Eliten zu sehen, aber hattest nicht noch den Ninja, die Ravenclaw Hexe und noch ein paar andere Sachen zuerst inner Liste?
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Aki03 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010
Naja, diese Sachen werden auch zuerst fertig, wenn ich wieder Luft habe, schau ich mal. Momentan bin ich eh mit 3 Projekten beschäftigt, da kann ich über Ideenarmut wohl wenig meckern.
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Ok, freue mich drauf wieder was von dir zu sehen. Grad deine Hintergründe und Highlights werden immer genialer =)
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Aki03 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
Darauf kannst du noch ein wenig warten. Seit ich wieder arbeiten bin, hab ich so wenig Zeit... mal sehen wies im Urlaub wird ^^
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Jo, lass dir Zeit =)
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SoulSilverIV Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
Ready to kick ass and slice mandibles, but we're all out of mandibles. :(
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
[link] D:<

Hate me now, but thanks for the fave =P
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SoulSilverIV Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
No, I will not hate you. :D
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:icondragunalb:
Dragunalb Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
WTF is this shit?! It scares me! D:
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SoulSilverIV Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
>=D SUCCESS

I SCARED YOU

I MADE POSSIBLE THE IMPOSSIBLE

YOU HAVE TO GIVE ME SOMETHING NOW KTHX
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
*shigh* Ok, what do you want...?

But I'm not going to kiss you, for my evil soul's sake! >=(
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SoulSilverIV Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
Sad face I mean you have to give me something like...

MONEY

LOTS OF MONEY

SO I CAN BUY VIDEO GAME SOUNDTRACKS

>=]
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I'm a student, I even haven't enough money for myself :XD:

Find something other...
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ScarletTemplar Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Dawn has a psyche called depression? That's very understandable since she's spent most of her service "going solo" against Elite brigards. You did excellent on the human anatomy and you tried your best on facial expressions. :clap: Keep it up and It'll turn out great to meet your expectation.
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Well, she gets depressed when she has nothing to do between the missions, therefore she gets to much time to think and gets remembred that she lost everything she cared for and is the very last representant of her now dieing culture. So between the missions she prefers to kill her spare time by training with other ODSTs close combat tactics, going into cryosleep or in the worst case, just going into the next bar to drawn her sorrow in alcohol and flip musik. As soon as she's on a mission again, she gets focused and ok. At least as ok as you can be when striking as lone wolf against entire Covy squads.

Yep, anatomy was ok (hope so after half an hour spending halfnaked in front of the mirror...), but due to the armor many of the feminine features got lost, so meh... Somehow human faces don't work if I draw them realistic, but they turn out ok when I draw them in comic style, no idea why. Bah, I need practice! Somehow the face looked better in the sketch then the actual coloured version, don't ask me why [link]
And I'm not sure if I should shorten that skirtthingy whe wears.

Oh and thenk you very much for the compliments and the fave =)
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ScarletTemplar Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I don't know if you realized this, but you just unlocked the hidden theme for Halo: Cases and my future story, "Neurophalon". Dawn with depression fits along the list fo my characters with problems of their own!

For example:

Lexington with PTSD or "Reach Trauma", Maika with Mania, Anau Dovum'ee/"Project Neurophalon" with Schizophrenia, Uece with Adjustment Disorder and Salvador also with PTSD with domestic violence. :lol:

By the way, I like the sketch version of Dawn. I think what kinda screwed her up is the overdose of shadowing of her eyes. And You're welcome!
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, yes, I noticed most of your chars have some flaws or traumata and I love that. Mine have that too. Makes OCs so much more interesting as when they would be the usual flawless chars with a perfect life and all.
Dawn with depressions and cutting herself before battle as result from her PTSD caused by Thar, making her going lone wolf all the time, Thar 'Sgharumee with his aggressive nature and his infinite hate for humans and Dawn, Nata 'Tanolee is slightly depressed after his encounter with the Xenos who ruined his career, Mras 'Socanree is a brutal bastard cause of his screwed childhood as stateless, ONI Agent Stevens is double-minded and always in doubt for his actions and Grunt Ololz became a freaked out little sicko, hearing voices who tell him to kill and he eats rotting Elites...
Guess your and my OCs should make a self-help group to solve their little problems together :XD:

Salvador has PTSD too and domestic viloence? What from? Did his pod landed in some city's sewers and after that he liked to punch Maika from time to time in the face? =P

Yep, shitty paintjob... Hope I can do that better in the next drawing featuring her and her bloodthirsty nature. I swear, I'll make it right next time, even if that means I've to sit day and night in front of a mirror! Otherwise I'll jump headlong from the roof and kill myself!
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ScarletTemplar Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I guess there will be a class therapy for all of our characters!

Salvador has PTSD because, since he have gone through many battles across the Halo array and colonial worlds, he's always the surviver with battle scares in his mind and saw many of his comrades died in front of his own eyes. He grew angry because he recieved so many medals and felt guilty for his soldiers' deaths on those tolkens, so he never took pride in that. As a matter of fact, he does punches Maika in the face sometimes. =p

Keep working on the paintjob! You'll do fine. =)
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Dawn: "The UNSC better bears all the costs for this nonsense therapy when they force me to join it..."
Stevens: "And you better learn how to live with Elites instead of murdering them. That or the firing squads will again have fun with you."
Dawn: "You ONI guys are such a bunch of assholes!"

Sounds good. Can't get enough of OC's with some psychic flaws!
Memo to myself: Draw angry Salvador throwing a glass full of sausages into Maika's face, hehe.

Yep, I'm, working on it. At least the sketchy doodles of her I did out of boredomness during class look fine so far since I haven't found time to draw the big masterpiece of her. But Lexington and Salvador are a pain in the ass in comic style, damn. Guess I've to train some more on them before I go to serious work but Maika, Uece and Anau look great. Guess Elites and guys with fancy hair are easier for me to draw =)
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ScarletTemplar Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Now that I'm done with my comic, now you can upload your comic (when it's done, of course). Take your time, though. There is no rush. =D

Speaking of therapy, that gives me another idea for my next issue! :lol:
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Dragunalb Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I've only drawn some sketchy doodles to see what style would fit better. Nothing outstanding, only tests of your and my OCs doing stupid stuff together. Maika, Uece and Dawn work pretty good, but Lex and Salvador turned out to be pretty tricky since I don't know how their hair looks exactly, but that problem sure will be solved somehow and then I'll start drawing =)

Yeah, I thought about a therapy comic too, but that ended in discussions about who's the crazyest in the group, future rape in my fics, excessive use of violence and ended in chaos and eachone bashing the other until some noses are bloody, making it all pretty complicated, so I leave it to you for your next comic strip ^^
I've sharply thought about a setting today and came up with something that migt be funny and crazy enough to please you and the high standards you have in Halo Cases featuring Maika, Salvador, Uece and Dawn for the moment. Guess Maika and Salvador pretty much enjoy showing Uece some human games where he can show what he learned once and Dawn as usual hasn't read some importand memos when she comes beck from her last mission and gets a nasty surprise *cough* :XD:
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Skyward-Dreamer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
Nice! Wow, she really looks menacing in all that blackness. And the knife ... horrors! I wouldn't want to open my door on Halloween and find her on my doorstep! ;)
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